英语书面表达的解题步骤及解题技巧

书面表达的解 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 步骤及解题技巧 书面表达的解题步骤及解题技巧 应该能把要点说全，而且能说好。写作时要注意有条理地陈述要点，将两种观点陈述清楚的同时不忘表明自己的态度，而且对自己的态度作重点阐述。具体可以按如下步骤：第一步，编写提纲，列出重点词汇。第二步，将词汇扩展成句子。第三步，用合适的关连词、过渡语使句子顺利成章。最后通读全文，作修改和补充。 确定时态。因汉语中无此语言现象，不少考生常犯此类错误。考生要强化这方面的意识，因为每一个句子都涉及时态，高考评分要求中时态错误原则上从应得分中扣除5分。因此，考生务必根据文意，确定全文正确时态。 为避免题目中的要点遗漏，杜绝文不对题的语句，可先将这些要点逐条译成英语。所列要点可以是主要的动词、动词词组、短语及句型。要使用自己熟悉的词汇或句型来表达。 选用正确的时态和语态，把所列的词、词组、短语等扩展成句。并运用表示递进、转折、因果、选择的连词或具有连接意义的副词或过渡句等将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应过渡自然，结构紧凑，前后连贯。这是书面表达中最关键的一步。 应从以下四个角度进行认真的审核与修改： 1. 词法角度。主要检查所用词语是否正确，搭配是否妥当；拼写是否有误；名词的单复数是否到位；代词的格和性是否恰当；词性是否混淆等； 2. 句法角度。主要检查句子结构是否完整；动词时态语态是否正确；人称是否符合要求；主谓是否一致；非谓语动词是否恰当；句子的表达是否符合英语表达习惯等； 3. 语篇角度。主要检查文章体裁、格式是否正确；词数是否符合要求；要点是否遗漏或误解；情节发展是否合理；过渡词句是否自然；语篇是否连贯；行文是否符合逻辑等。 4. 书写角度。主要检查字母大小写是否恰当匀称；标点符号是否运用正确；是否符合英语规范；书写是否工整；斜体是否一致；卷面是否整洁等。 “字体美观，格式正确，卷面整洁”是赢得阅卷老师“情感分”的首要因素。 影响书面表达得分的几个因素 高考书面表达评分 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 ： 第五档（很好）（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（好）（16-20分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（适当）（11-15分）：基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；有语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 写作一定要分段 高考英文作文30例活用句型 用于文章承转句 1. 那就是(说)…；亦即…That is to say, …　　= That is, …　　= Namely, … 　　例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。 We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities. 2. (A) 基于这个理由　　… For this reason … 　　(B) 为了这个目的　　… For this purpose, … 　　例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。 　　For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career. 3. 我们有理由相信…　　We have reasons to believe (that)子句 　　例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。 　　We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited. 4. 事实上　　As a matter of fact, …　　= In fact, … 　　例：事实上健康才是最重要。　　As a matter of fact, it is health that counts. 5. (A) 例如　　… For example, … 　　(B) 拿…做例子　　Take … for example.例：例如我们盲目地提高生活水准，却降低生活品质。 　　For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life. 6. 此外我们不应忽视…　　Besides (In addition), we should not neglect … 　　例：此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。 　　In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. 7. 相反地…　　on the contrary, …　　= by contrast, … 　　例：相反地少数学生似乎还在鬼混。 　　On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around. 8. 另一方面…　　on the other hand, … 　　例：政府应严格执法，另一方面大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。 　　The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution. 9. 然而很可惜的是…　　However, it is a pity that子句 　　例：然而很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。 　　However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour. 10. 换言之…　　in other words, …　　= to put it differently 　　例：换言之我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。 　　In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal. 11. 别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为… 　　It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that子句 　　例：别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为… 　　It may be true as assumed by others, but I don't. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end. 12. 从此之后我已发现…　　Ever since then, I have found that子句 　　例：从此之后我已发现…　　Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives. 13. 这样说来，假如…当然毫无疑问地… 　　In this light, if…, there can surely be no doubt (that) 子句 　　例：这样说来，假如我们能善用时间，当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。 　　In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere. 14. 更严重的是…　　What is more serious is (that)子句 　　例：更严重的是我们不珍惜野生动物。What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife. 15. 鉴于社会的实际需要…　　In view of the practical need of society, …. 　　例：鉴于社会的实际需要，愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。 　　In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English. 　　用于文章结论句 16. 如果能实践这三点…　　If one can really put the three points into action (practice), … 　　例：如果能实践这三点…。　　If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life. 17. 做这些简单之事，我们一定可以…　　By doing these simple things, we surely can …. 　　例：做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。 　　By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day. 18. 如此我相信…　　In this way, I believe (that)子句 　　例：如此，我相信大家能够像我一样享受乘坐公车的乐趣。 　　In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me. 19. 实践这些…　　By putting them (the above) into practice, …. 　　例：实践这些，在智育方面我一直能不断进步。　　By putting them(the above) into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education. 20. (A) 唯有符合此三项要求，我们才能…　　Only by living up to the three requirements, can we …. 　　(B) 唯有通力合作，我们才能…　　Only with combined efforts, can we …. 　　例：唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。 　　Only with combined efforts, can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in due course. 21. 最后，但并非最不重要…　　Last but no least, …. 　　例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。 　　Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency. 22. 这证据显示…的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。 　　This evidence shows that the importance of ….cannot be overemphasized. 　　例：这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。 　　This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized. 23. 由于这些理由，我…　　For these reasons, I …. 　　例：由于这些理由，我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。 　　For these reasons, I think that receiving college education in Taiwan is wise. 24. 总而言之…　　In conclusion, …　　= To sum up, … 　　例：总而言之¸好国民应该遵守交通规则。 　　In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations. 25. 因此我们能下个结论，那就是…　　We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)子句 　　例：因此¸我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。 　　We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world. 26. 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地… 　　If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that)子句 　　例：如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，我们就能精通英语。 　　If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English. 27. 因此，这就是…的原因　　Thus, this is the reason why …. 　　例：因此，这就是我重感冒的原因。　Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold. 28. 所以，我们应该了解…　　Therefore, we should realize (that)子句 　　例：所以，我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。 　　Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary. 29. 因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了… 　　We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that)子句 　　例：因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。 　　We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty. 30. 1. 从～观点来看…　　 From the ～ point of view, … 　　2. 根据～的看法… 　　 According to ～ point of view, ….　　例：从政治的观点来看，　　From the political point 常见的过渡词语有： 并列类 and； also； not only …but also； neither…nor；as well as 转折类 but； however； nevertheless 递进类 even； besides； what’s more； to make things even worse 时序类 first； next； then； shortly after； finally； meanwhile 强调类 especially； indeed； at least； 例证类 for example； such as； like； in one’s opinion； that is (to say) 对比类 on the contrary； on the other hand； while； (al)though 因果类 thanks to； because； as a result； so； due to； so that 总结类 in a word； in short； as you know； generally speaking 学生习作： TV And Website TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Websites also have different sections. You may choose the one you are most interested in. They are different in many ways. Moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation. It makes you feel that you are just on the spot. The programs change every day. Professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Some information on websites changes all the time. Not all of it is so updated. Everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter. Every medium has its own features. It is hard to say which is better. 分析 定性数据统计分析pdf销售业绩分析模板建筑结构震害分析销售进度分析表京东商城竞争战略分析 ：这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用过渡词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。 修改后的文章： TV and Website Both TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Similar to TV, websites also have different sections, so that you may choose the one you are most interested in.  However, they are different in many ways. Above all, moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation, which makes you feel as if you are just on the spot. Then, the programs change every day and professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Unlike TV, some information on websites change all the time, but not all of it is so updated. In addition, everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter. In a word, every medium has its own features, so it is hard to say which is better. 修改后的文章用过渡词来衔接上下段 第一段第一句为：Both TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. 第二段第一句为：However, they are different in many ways. 第三段第一句为：In a word, every medium has its own features… 这篇短文每一段的第一句都是主题句，在每个主题句前使用both…and, however, in a word使全文有序地衔接起来。 修改后的文章中还恰当的使用了其他的一些过渡词，也使文章增色不少。 以下我们在一起看一看2005年高考江西卷书面表达试题及参考例文，注意其中过渡词的使用。 原题：人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。 赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法 1．广交朋友2．可自由表达思想3．利于外语学习 1．浪费时间2．影响学习3．可能上当受骗 ？ 注意：1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。2．词数为100左右。3．参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheated 范文：: Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 下面我们来具体看一篇英语书面表达学生习作如何修改： 原题：假设你叫李华，今年暑假你的朋友Jane及其家人要到北戴河度假。她想租一套合适的住房。你碰巧在网上发现几则租房广告，认为其中一个较为合适，于是你将广告中的相关信息用e-mail发给Jane，供她参考。内容：房子位于城区，距机场高速公路仅一公里；备有安全系数高的停车场；附近有医院和现代化购物中心；要了解更详细的情况，请查阅网址www.hr.com.cn。100词左右。 学生习作： Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear you will come to Beidahe to spend your summer holiday with your family. I’ve just read several ads for house rent from the Internet, they might interest you, I think. One of the flat lies in the city seems to be suitable. It is only one km from the flat to the freeway leading to the airport, meanwhile, there is a safely-guarded parking area. And you can find a hospital and a modern shopping center nearby. The good designed flat looks fine and there is enough room for your family. If you need father information, you may look up the webside “www.houserent.com.cn.”. 评析：就文章内容而言，这是一篇相当不错的学生习作。要点齐全、行文连贯、条理清晰；当然，习作也有不少不足之处。以下我们一起按步骤来检查一下这篇习作。 1）字数：本文每行大约18个 单词 英语单词 下载七年级上册英语单词表下载英语单词表下载深圳小学英语单词表 下载高中英语单词 下载 ，6行左右，总计100词左右。字数符合题目要求。 2）段落：本文分为两段，基本合理。也可把最后一句话“If you need father information, you may look up the webside “www.houserent.com.cn.”.”另起一段。 3) 本文是一篇e-mail，属于书信，应有固定格式。但该篇习作作者忽视了这一点，文章缺少了结束语和署名。须在正文后另起一行，空3~4个字符加上结束语，如“Best wishes!”；在右下角署名“Yours, Li Hua”。 4）就该篇文章的遣词造句而言，interest you, safely-guarded等词语的运用增强了文章的表达力度，总体还是相当不错的。 5）检查拼写、标点和语法错误。 A. “wiil come”应该成“are coming”，因为come，go，leave等瞬间动词ichangyong进行时标将来。 B. “，they”此处可将逗号改为句号，“they”首字母大写；或真该为which引导的非限制性定于从句。 C. 根据语意，此处“lies”应改为“lying”，分词短语做后置定语。 D. “meanwhile”是副词而非连词，不能连接两个句子。此处，可在“meanwhile”前加“and”；或者逗号改称句号，变成两个句子。 E. “And you can find a hospital and a modern shopping center nearby.”此句改为there be 句型：“And there is a hospital and a modern shopping center as well nearby.”使前后举行一致，行文更连贯。 F. 用词不当，此处“farther”应该为“further”。 6) 再次检查卷面是否整洁。 下面是修改后的文章： Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear you are coming to Beidahe to spend your summer holiday with your family. I’ve just read several ads for house rent from the Internet, which might interest you, I think. One of the flat lying in the city seems to be suitable. It is only one km from the flat to the freeway leading to the airport, and meanwhile, there is a safely-guarded parking area. And there is a hospital and a modern shopping center as well nearby. The good designed flat looks fine and there is enough room for your family. If you need further information, you may look up the webside “www.houserent.com.cn.”. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 运用以上讲解的书面表达写作技巧，我们再来看下面这样一篇书面表达: 原题：联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察.假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：大小:近100户人家,约500口人。变化:过去很穷,78年后变化很大.人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。教育:原来的学校很小,现已经过改建.新建的教学楼有4层,是村里最美的建筑物.村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：(1)要点齐全,前后连贯。(2)词数:100-120之间。 分析:⑴ 根据试题中所提供要点,将所需要的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型。 ① 100 families and 500 people ② used to be very poor/ change a lot/ richer than before/ take on a new look ③ was very small/ have been rebuilt ④ newly-built/have 4 storeys/ most beautiful building ⑤ school-age children/ enjoy free education ⑵ 扩展成句,连句成篇；注意体裁、格式。本文为一篇发言稿，其格式与口头通知大体相同。因此，短文应有称呼，开场及结束语。既然介绍的是小村，所使用的人称应为it。应注意时态，语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ②It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small⑤. ⑥Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦The newly built teaching building. ⑧has 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨They enjoy free education in it. ⑩Thank you. 我们可以看到，现在这篇书面表达要点齐全，表达也没语法错误，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性也差，因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。如果使用一些恰当的连接词，并尽量使用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构，这个平淡的文章就会有很大改观，甚至会变得更精彩。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ②However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③and has been developing very fast. People here ④have/live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤and most children couldn't afford to go to school. ⑥But now it has been rebuilt ⑦and the newly built teaching building ⑧which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨What's more/Also, they enjoy free education. ⑩May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 评析：① 用介词短语作定语或用含定语从句的主从复合句。② 语句间缺少连接成分However。 ③ 表现作者对现在乡村的发展的喜悦心情,也起到承上启下作用。④ 较高级词汇。 ⑤ 作者对过去孩子们上不起学表示遗憾和同情。⑥ 语句间缺少连接成分,添加But。 ⑦ 语句间缺少承上启下连接成分and。⑧ 用含定语从句的主从复合句。 ⑨ 此处应添加一个承接上下文的过渡性词语，如“What's more/Also”，这样，前后就显得更加连贯了。 ⑩ 如能适当发挥，在结尾处添加像“May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!”的表希望，祝愿的语句，会使全文更加完整，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的，从而收到更佳的表达效果。 ④为较高级词汇。 ①⑧为较复杂句式. ②⑥⑦⑨这些连接词的恰当使用无疑能使全文过渡自然，令读者对后续的句子产生心理的期待和准备，增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。 ③⑤⑩适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。 以上我们可以看出，在考生若在文章中使用一些较高级词汇或复杂句子结构以及恰当的连接词，能提高文章水准，在考试的评分中得到较高的档次。 总之，希望同学们通过以上启发，灵活运用，坚持用科学的 方法 快递客服问题件处理详细方法山木方法pdf计算方法pdf华与华方法下载八字理论方法下载 多写多练，就一定能写出高质量的英语作文，在高考中取得成功。